第一次写开发信，望指点
Dear Simeon,Have a good day!
I’m Laura from XX,LTD in china.Glad to hear that you’re on the market for pesticide.We specialize in the field for several years, with the strength of insecticide, herbicide and fungicide, with good quality and competitive price.We can supply full product list from Bulgaria market. Hope to establish business relationship with you!
Should you wanna know more about our company, pls visit:
Should you have any questions, pls do not hesitate to contact me.
Best regards,
Laura
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[ 本帖最后由 5788 于 2017-11-9 08:47 编辑 ]
我自己觉得可能我自己公司的优势没怎么表现出来，就是像个群发开发信，也看不出特点。希望大家指点下，如何写的更好些
我需不需要列几个产品？
可以加一句“would you like tell me what is your focus on”吗
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