tradingman 发表于 2019-4-2 16:49:15

商务英文写作技巧8

修改前
Hi Charle,
thank you. if so then we will update new PI for your ref in attachment.
pls check is it ok? if ok then pls send me the bank slip. thank you
advance.
Karen YL
sales manager
Keysun masking tape manufactory
修改后
Hi Charle,
Thank you! If so, then we will update PI for your ref. in attachment.
Pls confirm if it is OK? If OK, pls send me the bank slip. Thank you in
advance.
Karen YL
sales manager
Keysun masking tape manufactory
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