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发表于 2007-7-18 10:54:00 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
最近单子变少,专著于开发信开发客户,但是总对自己的开发信不满意,贴出来希望大家帮我指点下,也欢迎大家一起来贴,毕竟这也算是给客户的第一张脸,大家来贴脸^^
Dear sirs,
Good day.
I’m Linda from Hangzhou #### Equipment Co.,LTD. We got to know your company from International weighing instrument exhibition; we feel your products are compatible with ours. By this opportunity we’d like to find a chance to cooperate with you.
Our factory has been in ### industry for more than 8 years, now we have achieved the year production amount of 8000pcs per year, half of which is exported.
Our production as below, I’d like to commend OCS-A and OCS-M as our best seller type in overseas market. Both of them have CE approval, we also own the patent for the appearance and load cell for OCS-M. OEM service is offered to many overseas companies, as #### etc.
I also attached the pricelist, take a reference.

If you have any request on our products, please feel free to let me know.

Best regards,
怎么看都觉得很不舒服,谢谢高手给我些指点
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